The-Orkestrator's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brooklyn gon' get ya]

Yea

Yo the chorus is completely off beat, but Im reviewin the verses:

Its funnny how everytime I comeback to ya page you always gettin better, OK so mabye you drop one or two not so good tracks every once in a while, but the line of best fit is going up at around a 45° degree angle.

Im gettin used to ya flow now, you got the delivery down almost perfect, all you gotta do now is watch out when your writing your lyrics so that you dont write too much so you gotta spit it out fast, or too little so that you gotta slow down - thats the main reason your tracks dont sound as proffessional as they could be.

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The guy below me:

I didn't really notice any talk of beef in this track and Its obvious BNs takin notice of revs as look how far its come lol.
- 18 tracks with a couple of take-the-piss ones I think hes doin pretty well.

Broken-Needle responds:

ye man, what I've noticed is that I don't do good with beefs which are not my own, like that AEP nail in the coffin I went down. I think I should stick to my own business so I'm afraid I'll have to end this beef, expect the closing track tomorrow. Anyway yes the chorus is horrible, lol I never do chorus's for that reason, lol I need more practice on that I guess. And yes you are right on the lyrics part, I always seem to like what I've created so much that I either rush it or slow it down, so from now on I'll try to take out or add some parts of or to my lyrics that way I would sound more proffesional. This track was adressing his comeback tho' not too much beef because I wanted him to truly diss me but I think he wants to end this beef so I'll go ahead and do that for him. Thanks for such a good review man, all 10's, a five and the support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Sleep the cousin of death(prev]

Sayyy

I think theres some deep lyrics, but like the 1 below said, wit that otha gy spittin it keeps goin quiet and then gets real load.

Apart from that you doin better expressin more emotoions thru the mic, you can never have too much of that.

Good job - and at the end of the day it doesn't matter if you aint got Kamikaze's permission, it aint like you're selling this.

5/5

Peace

Joca did a nice job of mixin too

Broken-Needle responds:

ye thanks man, ma' bud improved alot since I've started teaching him but stillhas much to learn and so do I. But yeah thanks for noticing the emotion, o and this is only a preview so there will be improvement. Yeah u right on the Kamikazi's beat situation, I ain't sellin da beat o dis track but I still want his permission. Anyway man I thank you for the good review, the 5 and support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Next Level - Tha Takeova ~187~]

U reppin then

You're the best person here to indroduce the UK genres in my opinion, Keep showing them, its up to you man.

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BeAtBrEaKeR187 responds:

hell yeh homie ima keep showin em, im producin the second artist on this track's entire mixtape lol, MORE GRIME TO COME, thanks for the review bruv BRAP!

~187~

[Experimental Beat (???)]

The synth...

Its that little high pitch synth thats pissin me off, it ruins the flutes.

This track, though without the synth, sounds nice, I'm not sayin get rid of the synths cus they're too high, I'm sayin that they're not on melody, and it sounds like you're just mashing random notes.

I like the beginning loop though, but I think if you do another one, break it down for the intro, and then when the beat drops use that flute loop you got at the start of this beat.

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trew-lyricist-215 responds:

yeah i didn't spend much time on it...jus wanted to try sumthin different...thanks for tha review.

[Deal Da Cards (Beatz)]

Sound good

Just sayin' turn the kicks down a lil cs there distorting on my speakers.

I like the beat though, it sounds like you gonna be making some sick beats in no time, just make sure to add some more diversity, thats all your tracks are lacking.

Good job.

Peace

Sirhc7000 responds:

Thx Mayne. I'll keep dat in mind...no seriously I will.

Yea I realized da kick wuz a little high. Da dB's were off da charts!

Aight Peace.

[Codeine In My Drank]

Ayayay

Trippy beat, nice snares, the beats a lil quiet though.

At the start I don't think that synth goes well with the track, but everything else sounds good.

On a more serious note, watch out with that shit, I heard it fucks up your sex drive or some shits.

Don't do drugs kids.

Come and cheeck out mines

Bleek989 responds:

lol thx for that review man...yea shits krayzie im off it now lol that just a one time thing for me you kno...but ill hit ya page up

[Lejin - (3)Corrupt GMs]

Returning the favour

I don't really rate the melody, not complex enough, but it gets the message across with a nice beat.

To be honest you're probably the best lyricist on here (I'll probably get hated on annonymously for sayin that)
Anyway you got the chorus soundin like Lloyd.B and you show lots of potential in this track.

It's a pity about all the haters though, I got this one up from 3.51.

Corruption is everywhere: It it weren't for corruption, we probably wouldn't be here.

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Lejin responds:

hmm maybe nextime you can make me a killer beat and we can work on that.

[::Z::Oh My God]

I wish I could make beats like that..

Is this on Reason?

The horn stabs are quality, and I never heard you do anythin like this before man!

The melody with that plucking instrument thing (I dont even know what it is) It sounds really familiar... like off a game or something.

It got a good hard beat stuck on it - Perfec drums

Nice track

Peace

Zajed responds:

man this beat was so fun to make
i have to bounce with it lol

i made it with fruity loops
even i dont know what this is lol, i thought it sucka den made a random melody, and outta the random melody i made this

i think its one of my best yet

oh and your beat realest inspired me a bit
the ringtone thing, i had to copy it lol i just used it in a different way

and i wish i could make beats like you doin

peace man

[::Z::Rainy Days]

OK This is my style

Is that a guitar sample or did you make this guitar?
What program is this on.. don't say Fruity Loops.

Yes finish this, of course finish this, but make it a hard beat you know? Slow as well and this will be a hit.

It is like its straight from 'Kill Bill'.

Finish this man.

Zajed responds:

actually i played that on guitar
it was a basic melody i learned from my teacher 2-3 years ago, took me like 2 hours to get that melody back in my head

well im runing low on sounds, gunshots footsteps n stuff, so it takes a while to finish this peace

well its inspired by some of your tracks

i try to tell a full story with it

thanks fo comment man

[Ryder (diss)]

Well

Your flow keeps changing - which is good, but you gotta get rid of that echo on your voice thats come back, other then that, you fit the track well.

Peace

Broken-Needle responds:

thanks man, an' I'm sorry once again for not giving u credit fo' the beat. The echo I added for fun but I aint good at mixin which is why I had greeksta mix the track with your beat, anyway thanks fo' da review and good scores,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out