The-Orkestrator's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Guitar Fire II]

err this your piano

Im likin this classical pinch here! blud call this Piano Fire!!

Im thinkin you should have done a string variation as well as guitar/piano.

but you got this Guitar down serious - had me noddin my head 4rilla.

Nice work killa

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[Rock Tha Fuck On *Fixed]

Yoo!

You got a jazzy mo fuka here - did you ever play that game Pocket Monsters on the 1st Nintendo??? this tune brings back so many MEMORIES! LOL

You kno tha 1: where you could be a vampire or that green monster! an you fighted in sinks an stuff!!

Yea man this sounds good all tha way till the end, then it gets real smooth.

I like that clap 2 man you might have to send me that 1 l8a lol

5/5 4 bringin back tha memries, standard

[Iron Man- (Black Sabbath)]

Very nice!

NIce 1 man I'd like to hear a better quality version of this though!

Real nice work

JakesFable responds:

Yea my microphone is messed up right now but thanks for the review and rating.

[Stainz - K69 Diss ~187~]

Nice1

I see what you mean about your drumline, youre gettin good at switchin between UK/US beats.

I like the melody on this, a lil commercial grime an a lil underground.

but:
You gotta get your MCs to spit about things that alot more ppl can relate to yano - this whole tracks about K69 - especially if you gonna drop a sick beat like this you dont wanna restrict it to your area code getme?

You need to drop an instrumental tho man, and I got a beat in the pipeline UK/US Hiphop

[Ethnic Joint]

eww

Dirty beat man!! Im lovin them pipes, made me feel like i was in Baghdad/Japan or somethin they sound real dark - and tha combination with that string, genius.

1.67? lol I dont know man people need to get a fuckin life - this beat obviously killed anything them pricks could come up with.

5/5 1.67 - 2.50 lol

DJ-Cobb responds:

Thanks man I love em too
I got more tracks on the way look out

>>**Cobb**<<

[Piano Stories (Rough Draft)]

i Like

Yo Ive been looking thru your page man its sick, an I tell you, you need some more reviews cuz you got some tight beats on here lol.

This track aint really diverse, but it has this something that makes you keep listening and alert thru it all.

Still, I think you gotta add more stuff to this is theres no lyrics, even if its just a flute or somethin on top, it feels kinda empty.

but I gotta remember to check back here ill put this on favourites

Keep it up MattBlade!! 5/5

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MattBlade responds:

Hell yea man, strait up though the haters aint been treating me good on here, but u kno im still making music whether the haters wanna jam to or not, so thanks for ya review, oh yea this track aint close to bein done yet so look out for the new version soon

[Reesun -Ride Real Slow]

Shit Killa

How much of this is yours man - Last beat of yours I heard was that sample beat lol you goin far man keep it up brUV!!!!

5/5

Killah-J responds:

Da Beat Is All Me. I jus Chopped up a young Joc vocal and dats it. but da rest of da beat synths, horn, bass all me. Yea mayn i did improve since last time huh lol. Dats what Rocbattle do to ya.

~Killah_J~

[UK to US (NG Version) ~187~]

I like

The chords you did with the piano go well, and the beat sounds good, only theres one lil note in there that dont go every 4 bars on the piano in the background.

Like the bassline 2 tho

Niice

BeAtBrEaKeR187 responds:

oh shit yeh i kno i can hear that note too man, ima change that, this is just the NG version tho man, when this hits myspace its gonna be litterly 100 patterns big, this version is 27..

~187~

[Brooklyn gon' get ya]

Yea

Yo the chorus is completely off beat, but Im reviewin the verses:

Its funnny how everytime I comeback to ya page you always gettin better, OK so mabye you drop one or two not so good tracks every once in a while, but the line of best fit is going up at around a 45° degree angle.

Im gettin used to ya flow now, you got the delivery down almost perfect, all you gotta do now is watch out when your writing your lyrics so that you dont write too much so you gotta spit it out fast, or too little so that you gotta slow down - thats the main reason your tracks dont sound as proffessional as they could be.

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The guy below me:

I didn't really notice any talk of beef in this track and Its obvious BNs takin notice of revs as look how far its come lol.
- 18 tracks with a couple of take-the-piss ones I think hes doin pretty well.

Broken-Needle responds:

ye man, what I've noticed is that I don't do good with beefs which are not my own, like that AEP nail in the coffin I went down. I think I should stick to my own business so I'm afraid I'll have to end this beef, expect the closing track tomorrow. Anyway yes the chorus is horrible, lol I never do chorus's for that reason, lol I need more practice on that I guess. And yes you are right on the lyrics part, I always seem to like what I've created so much that I either rush it or slow it down, so from now on I'll try to take out or add some parts of or to my lyrics that way I would sound more proffesional. This track was adressing his comeback tho' not too much beef because I wanted him to truly diss me but I think he wants to end this beef so I'll go ahead and do that for him. Thanks for such a good review man, all 10's, a five and the support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

[Sleep the cousin of death(prev]

Sayyy

I think theres some deep lyrics, but like the 1 below said, wit that otha gy spittin it keeps goin quiet and then gets real load.

Apart from that you doin better expressin more emotoions thru the mic, you can never have too much of that.

Good job - and at the end of the day it doesn't matter if you aint got Kamikaze's permission, it aint like you're selling this.

5/5

Peace

Joca did a nice job of mixin too

Broken-Needle responds:

ye thanks man, ma' bud improved alot since I've started teaching him but stillhas much to learn and so do I. But yeah thanks for noticing the emotion, o and this is only a preview so there will be improvement. Yeah u right on the Kamikazi's beat situation, I ain't sellin da beat o dis track but I still want his permission. Anyway man I thank you for the good review, the 5 and support,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out