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naaaaaa

This is my kinda TUNE blud, this is sum nxt level DRE shit shounds like "The Watcher"

What u usin 4 this?? I begz u finish this, just repeat it n switch it about abit, u dont need 2 add no more melody, just let it loop a bit then cut tha beat off then bring it back like with a gunshot or somethin.

Im serious u gota finish this 1.

peeces

Keep up ur singin' m8

This Mix CD sounds like its going to be quite diverse. You got some skill switchin between genres (Though I don't know if you're still keeping up the grime tracks you used to do).

Ya mic quality is sick tho, the bass is spot on and you got the vocal content sorted.

Although... (I don't know if you recorded the vocals seperately or not) there is one thing I would change, and that would be to lower the piano a bit or gently pan it, because it >slightly< sounds like its trying to compete with the vocals.

If you can't change this its no problem, as I'm just looking for things to be worked on and there isn't anymore lol

XIIIthSoundsSoldier responds:

Well im more of a hip hop rapper than grime rapper to be honest but i can switch styles to suit.
Yeah i did record the vocals separately and thats a good idea to pan the piano - will do.
Thanks for the input dude and dont forget 2 check your PMs

nice melody

Do you mind if I remix this track for a different genre?

4 rilllllllla

Sounds complete to me, it sounds all sik up to the part when you bring the "Silent Hill" synths in just after the strings. It's not so much as they're overbearing, they just sound off key with the melody you've been adapting us 2.

Probably my 2nd fav tune of yours.

The chords you're hittin on this 1 with the strings is bringin back memories of D'explicit lol qual

O O Jeez

y 2.50?

This shits inspiring

gud bob

Very original in the sense that Ive never heard a track with just drums panned to the left, and the melody all round.
In 1 part the piano distorts a bit while its playin with the strings but thats hardly a prob.

Gd job

LfunkeyA responds:

thanks

Ive heard beta from u

Ok some of tha track was jokes ill give u that, but tha rest I didnt hear cuz u was mumblin, your ok in som parts but it just seems u lose motivation.

Goin on from wat u sed in Y.Y's review, If it was a race 2 whoeva puts up tha lyrics 1st, then fair play, in that case i guess its ok if u rushed it.

but every1 that is reviewin u nos that u can do beta then this.

Yea ta track was jokes, but u cud hav made it much beta

PM me for help tho.

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Broken-Needle responds:

yah I agree wit ya, in my opinion dis is my by far da worst work ive done(da 1st 2 r better dan dis cuz dey rmy 1st's). I could've dun alot better n 2 make up for it im workin on a new track ive got some o da beat so far n dats y i will pm u cuz i don do good wit beats so u'll have 2 give me some advice. Thanks 4 da review n yo time,
Keep it pimpin'
BN out

Amazin

Originality:

Although I can't give you full credit on this track as it is a remake, I can tell you that this is the best rendition of the song I have ever heard.
You have added you own dark twist to it.

Clarity:

What u want me to say, It sounds like you have your own private orchestra.

Diversity:

I think this track changes every four bars so it's very diverse, whether it be a string pluck or a choir shout, every bar is different.

Overall, I'd like to hear more renditions in this dark manor, congratulations, this is worty of a 5

MaestroRage responds:

There are quite a few dark pieces in the forge, these pieces however take time, to kinda mellow out and gather the energies it needs. Forcing them out for me personally makes them sound wierd and broken. For example, those pizzicato strings that come in when the "Here comes the bride" riff plays the second time took me a long while, though it's a simple progression, it needed time to just grow into the melody.

Thank you for the review and 5 ragekid, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

Real nice

I like the feel to this 1, the "Kill Bill" guitar fx are what keeps this track goin and make it soun more proffessional.

Tha beat is nice n constant, with a touch of old skool, its a relaxin track.

Overall for a quick beat, this is pretty good so it deserves 5 hands down.

keep up tha beats
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yep

ERRRRRR lol real nice 1

I vote u make more beats in this style, Real nice bass thing u got goin on ere wit tha guitars, makes a change from other things on here.

It reminds me of that Aliyah tune in "Romeo Must Die" duno what its called.

all I would hav done to make this better is turn tha beat up a lil bit, can't think of anythin else lol

keep it up

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Wopatshki responds:

oh man romeo must die good movie but i cant remember anything of that movie

only a few things when the ninja kung fu guy fightin against badguys and the camera goes through there body and you can see the bones how they break (phew i hope you understand it lol)

im glad you liked it
im gettin better with the time in this style

but awww the drums lol

thanks alot man

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