What have u DONE??
What did you do to the original track, all I noticed was you made a few cuts and looped it, then added a generic sound effect here and there with a generic DJ tag.
I would give you credit if you remade this track by say finding the sample and putting your own beat over it . . . but you haven't done anything to the original!
If you were doing this real time on decks then maybe it would get a better response, but being as you had the benefit of time I expected more.
OI BN you didnt tell me how good you was gettin.. I know its a lil preview-skit thing but hell you gettin there man..
KEEP. THIS. FLOW. it suits you. but that doesn´t mean you can relax on it.. keep practicing with this STYLE trust me.
hah, glad u like it man, no worries tho I'ma make all ma shit sound good now, lol. If u wanna see more of this man just gimme another beat, lol=D. Sick work on this 1 too man btw.
Keep it pimpin'
Long time no speak
Good powerful intro, yet straight to the point. You could get some heavy lyrics on this and the hard beat would just excentuate the meaning.
Good 5 TAJED. Still watchin your shit man.
YOURE ON BEAT!!!
Yea man, like that guy pretending to be Breeze said, you did aLOT better staying on beat this time round so big props to ya for this track (I thinks your best one so far).
One bad part though, I cant hear what you say in the first verse and chorus, apart from that you did well, so congrats again and enjoy your 5 while it lasts man, you earned it.
lmfao overall rating 0, know u didn't mean it man iz funny tho. Wish I would've known the first verse is hard to hear and the chorus b4 I uploaded, lol, thanks for pointing it out tho. And that guy is Breeze, lol he made a new account, I talked to him on aim about it and he told me he made a new account. I alos believe this is my best so far. Anyway man thanks for the 10's (know u meant to give me a 10 also for overall), the review, 5, support and pointing out that you can't hearme at parts,
Save the Earth
Keep it pimpin'
Track is EPIC
Where do I send the checks?
Wow thanks man, epic is a generous word to use for this im not even done with it yet, heh thanks for ya review man, btw ill give my bank account number lata for dat money, lol B ez brah
Production at its Finest
I gave all 10's in all catergories and I meant that sincerely, it's quite rare when you get a track like this with production almost unflawed.
The whole thing could do justice to any rapper at all and not let them down.
You and Zajed really pulled this one off so props for it being so good, lovin' the horns at the end, who did those?
The whole track is awesome so you get a 5, wear it proudly, you earned it.
yeha man thanks alot we found out what we needed to improve in with this beat and Zajed helped out alot and that was him with the brass ;) anyways you already know i appreciate tour thoughts on this thanks alot man from both of us.
Yea man what Mike said is partially tru: everytime you submit, the production enters "NG public domain".. whatever the FUCK that is, but I wouldn't rely too much on any legal help because the disclaimer sounds pretty dodgy - I advise people not to submit their best beats and shit.
Nice track btw
thx yea im slowin down on the beats for NG but we will see..:)
Yea I luv tha intro, like eminem style.
Real good idea to put the message thru using your AP.
The lyrical content is all there and It's one of your best constructed + most well written pieces.
Side note to everyone: we wanted to use the full orchestrated version of the melody, but this wasn't possible to put a beat on, as it all has to be cut up.
and to everyone that aint heard this all, listen again, I had the privilege to read the lyrics and its pretty sick
Biggup U BN
Save the Bees
daz wazzup man, apreciate the all the good reviews I'm getting, yeah for the intro I guess I did it Eminem style now that I think about it, I didnt realize it at first, I simply wanted to makeit feel like I'm teaching a lesson. An' yeah I think the lyrics are ma' best that I've released so far. Oh and the link doesnt work, I dont think it fit so here it is: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic.php?id=691165
Anyway thanks for da beat, nearly perfect scores, da 5, da dl, constructive review and support,
Save the bees
Keep it pimpin'
hOly bAttle huh? returnin tha favour, but why cant I hear any of ya tracks without havin to download em?
Sucks to be you my friend lol inabit
Man I dunno why YOU got that problem but much apprecation for the review....keep'em commin' son
You got a download from me cus the ng player wont work ha.
Real smooth to drop the lyrics to.
Much appreciated bro....keep'em commin' son
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